October 24th, 2006

Beloved Stage 5

Update Beloved - Chapter 24 - The Shit Hits the Fan

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ETA: Now completely betaed by the marvelous gillo. Any remaining errors are my own.

Voila! A new chapter - extra long for your personal pleasure - of Beloved from liliaeth and myself… only two little weeks since the previous one. This follows directly on the heels of the last chapter. Please follow the Warning Alert System.

2014 - November
William is ten and a half years old.

Prozac Alert
I’d say that the title is pretty much accurate – stuff happens. Some pretty stinky stuff. Someone finally storms the Council, someone’s finally back from the great beyond, the pixies are flying in formation, and the threads are finally weaving together.


Please, as always, read and comment! A relaxed Buffy!Muse doesn’t always mean things are all blood and peaches for our intrepid characters, but she’s pleased with her work, and says things’ll get better. **looks ‘better’ up in her dictionary, and is skeered**

Feedback is always welcomed.

Goddess bless willa_writes - my prime-time read-through buddy, gillo, who only managed to beta partially before leaving on a well-earned vacation (‘cause at least 1500 words came after she left), and just_sue, who gets a partial writing credit for this chapter. Without her, the plotting wouldn’t have gone half so well. All mistakes are liliaeth’s and mine… will be properly betaed when the teacher returns. Only posting in my LJ until it's all clean and pretty. *grins*

To read Beloved from the beginning, go Here.



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