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Sound Drabbles For open_on_sunday 01/23/05 - #4-6

This week the challenge as recommended by tastylilgifty: SOUND

Cross posted to open_on_sunday and my regular journal.

BtVS – Season 6 – Post Smashed – Spike/Buffy – R, for wordage

4. She Says

Fucking Buffy is an all out sensory experience. She fucks like she fights, putting everything into it. She bites and claws, stripping flesh from bone and hair from scalp. When he calls her an animal, he means it literally.

It’s her noises Spike strives for. The grunts as their bodies impact. The mewls as his tongue finds the particularly sensitive spot between her legs or behind her ear. The howling yips when he nips at her dusky nipples until they bruise.

She can close her eyes and pretend he’s someone else, but her body sings its melodies just for him.

BtVS – Season 6 – Post Smashed – Buffy/Spike – R, for wordage

5. He Says

Fucking Spike is an experience unlike anything else. He doesn’t sweat or smell, he’s flexible as an alley cat, and he’s never quiet.

He roars when he penetrates and purrs he’s ridden. A true beast in bed, though he adamantly refuses to go gameface. Buffy wonders if she’ll stake him if he drops fang during sex and watches him struggle for control.

No matter how hard she grinds or beats, Buffy can’t block out his words: “Come for me, luv.” “So bloody hot, pet.” “Fuck, Slayer. You’re killin’ me all over again.”

All she hears is: “I love you, Buffy.”

BtVS – Pre-Series – William/Drusilla

6. The Siren’s Lure

William stands, transfixed, at the vision before him. That a woman would look so directly at himself, so eager to entice him with the soft hum of her voice. The tinkle in her laugh. The brightness of her gaze.

“I see what you want. Something glowing and glistening. Something... effulgent,” she croons, weakening his knees and resistance.

“Do you want it?”

“Oh yes. God yes,” he cries, the sound of his heartbeat pounding in his ears blocks out all other sound.

She bites, drawing deeply, leaving him feeling giddy as the rush of blood leaves his body. Until it stops.



( 14 comments — Leave a comment )
Jan. 25th, 2005 10:43 am (UTC)
loved them all, but the second won my heart, and the contrarst between she says and he says amazing.
Feb. 1st, 2005 06:16 pm (UTC)
I loved doing the he said/she said ones. Poor kids - need work on their communications skills, don't they?
Jan. 25th, 2005 01:39 pm (UTC)
Fantastic contrast between he said/she said, and the last one just broke my heart. Gorgeous work!
Feb. 1st, 2005 06:18 pm (UTC)
Yeah, William really had the life sucked outta him, didn't he? Poor thing, so ready to give up on life.
Jan. 25th, 2005 08:38 pm (UTC)
Extremely well written and the Spike/Buffy ones are very hot. The imagery is splendid.

The third one is absolutely chilling in its imagery.

Feb. 1st, 2005 06:19 pm (UTC)
**is absurdly pleased by your kind words**
Jan. 25th, 2005 11:03 pm (UTC)
Very good! I liked the way you were true to the characters in the first two. Because at that time, Spike knew she was trying to block out the fact that it was him, and Buffy knew he loved her but didn't want to hear it at all. So that was very well done.

Jan. 25th, 2005 11:04 pm (UTC)
Non-scathing commentary on Spuffy sex. From you, it's the highest compliment. **smooches you** and hopes never, ever to see TMNT porn again.
Jan. 25th, 2005 11:06 pm (UTC)
LOL. Well, I was going to say, the third one was my favorite for obvious reasons, but then I went back and read them again, firmly pushing my biases to the side for 100 words, and was able to read objectively. :P
Feb. 1st, 2005 06:21 pm (UTC)
Sometimes I can be so proud of you, Robin. **huggles**
Jan. 26th, 2005 07:26 am (UTC)
Oh these are all wonderful, I loved the.
Feb. 1st, 2005 06:27 pm (UTC)
Very glad you found something to enjoy in my writing.
Jan. 31st, 2005 02:14 pm (UTC)
Ooo, those are all fabulous. Especially the second one. Yum.
Feb. 1st, 2005 06:30 pm (UTC)
Glad you liked, hon. I enjoyed writing them.
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