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Minor Character Drabble For open_on_sunday 04/25/04 - #1

This week's challenge is minor characters.

BtVS 1x11 - Out of Sight, Out of Mind


Hey, Did You Hear Something?"

“Hey, did you hear something?” She stopped crying at the age of one month, when it became obvious nobody paid attention. Fed, bathed and changed on schedule. Sweet baby, no trouble, they said.

“Hey, did you hear something?” She stopped trying to make friends at school, when it became obvious that her opinions didn’t matter, was always the leftover player for any team and boys? They never looked her way at all.

“Hey, did you hear something?” Things were different now. She made sure she was heard if not seen. The last thing they heard before their deaths was… “Marcie.”

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xionin
Apr. 26th, 2004 04:58 pm (UTC)
i really like the mood and the rhythm.
nice job.
spikes_heart
Apr. 26th, 2004 08:21 pm (UTC)
Glad you enjoyed - just trying to pick an obscure character was challenge enough. I'm happy to have done her justice.
xionin
Apr. 27th, 2004 04:57 am (UTC)
i like the obscure character theme. i may explore it a bit more myself.
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